I don't know if this is exactly within the realm of this assignment - I'd like to discuss waves in Daredevil because his sensitivity to waves are far beyond the normal human level. However, I'm not sure if that's an unrealistic effect that the assignment asks for, or if it's just the concept of the comic character and if I shouldn't talk about it in this paper. I would discuss the normal human wave sensing abilities to hypothesize how unrealistic Daredevil's senses are. Would that be okay? If not I can come up with another outline.
Thesis
II. Sound Waves
a. sound waves help him "see"
i. he hears sounds as if the amplitude were much higher
b. can also impede his sense of "vision"
i. loud train
ii. explosion
III. Air (wind) Waves
a. contributes to his acute sense of smell
i. can find elektra by her scent
b. smoke (can obscure his senses)
IV. Water Waves
a. When it rains, Daredevil can "see"
i. unrealistic because water is not falling on every area at once unless really heavy rain
b. inconsistent because Daredevil sleeps in water
i. he sound be hyper-sensitive to movement in water
V. Conclusion
Restate Thesis
Summarize points
This should be OK except that the assignment says to describe *one scene* with three unphysical elements or three scenes that violate the *same* physics principles. Seems like your outline is on a variety of elements that are unphysical in all different scenes. Please rework your outline before you start your paper (or pick a different movie if this one isn't suitable for the assignment). Also flesh out your outline to include more details; that will make writing the paper much easier. Score: 7 of 10 points.
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